tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-964918039771619316.post6154994835747615664..comments2022-09-07T02:42:13.633-07:00Comments on Effective Communication SIE: SIE2015/MubinNoorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15084715574508443096noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-964918039771619316.post-76780554054913502042015-12-03T06:58:06.449-08:002015-12-03T06:58:06.449-08:00Hi Mubin, I am able to see the improvements you ha...Hi Mubin, I am able to see the improvements you have made as compared to all the previous draft. In your post, you mentioned about how engineering technologies have helped to combat climate change with great examples. Engineers from all around the world have incredible ideas. We might be able to use their ideas and implement in Singapore.Joey Neohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00822792318719653521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-964918039771619316.post-30401525629024420182015-12-02T20:13:56.736-08:002015-12-02T20:13:56.736-08:00Hi Mubin,
I felt that you have written very well ...Hi Mubin,<br /><br />I felt that you have written very well for this final draft compared to all the previous reader response drafts. I felt that Brad has helped us a lot in improving our writing skills and instilling some confidence in us. I think that the final draft can be slightly shorten as i feel that it is a bit lengthy. Anyway, you have did a very good job in strengthening your point on why engineers are indeed needed in climate changeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02002727495056023046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-964918039771619316.post-14569554091333533242015-12-02T12:20:17.715-08:002015-12-02T12:20:17.715-08:00Hi Mubin, better early than late. I am glad that y...Hi Mubin, better early than late. I am glad that you have the enthusiastic spirit to keep you from writing the reader response. I am able to see the improvement you have made compared to draft 1. I feel that Brad wants us to appreciate more on the beauty of the article with a touch of criticism. One suggestion I can give is to keep it short and simple. Complicated writing will only hinder our performance.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03162807221877887226noreply@blogger.com